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i am stuck on this poem

ok heres the deal well i need to write a 20 line poem and this is what i have and im stuck it is about volunteering at a preschool i helped with hw and spent time with kids but i feel this isnt good enough its not showing my dedication

Noah’s Ark

Kids everywhere from age 2 to 11

They talk about God and play all day

We have the turtles age 2 and 3

We have the possums age 4 and 5

Than we have monkeys and lions age 5

Than we have koalas who are kinders so cute and kind

Finally roos 1 though 5th grade

We go from snack time to homework with the roos

Everyone always smiling
kids run to give you hugs making you fall in love
so adorable so sweet
i never thought these kids would change the way I think
How life is so precoius so sweet
i dont want to leaves these kids behind
I have grown to them seeing them everyday

And their smiling faces

Re: i am stuck on this poem

Hmm, maybe if you can you can write something about how you feel the people at this school feel about going there and some of the things you/they like about the school that you've noticed? Or what you feel really strongly about with the school?

Sorry if that's a bad idea, but that's what came to my mind first. :nosweat:

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thank you dez thats a great idea i will try that

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I just wanna say I agree with Dez. :) I think what you're doing is awesome by the way!

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yeah im adding on thats christabel