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Rhyfelwr

March 23rd 2013 05:13 AM

Yet another nameless poem...

Well, was bored on the train to Vienna. I've got free inet here in the hotel, so I decided to upload the 'poem' that came into my mind yesterday.

Again, if any names pop into your head, please tell me, as I've got them saved as 'Nameless poem'! :hehe:

Enjoy!

her_bright_skies

"Darkness.
Motion.
Screeching tires.
Deafening crash.

Pain.
Shouts.
Bloody drops.
Ruby red.

Confusion.
Melancholy.
Penetrating metal.
Sickening rips.

Sirens.
Screams.
Flowing blood.
Running footsteps.

Desertion.
Abandonment.
No hope.
Fading light.

Query.
Why?
Why me?
Dying flame.

Light.
Rescue.
Kind Savior.
Another chance."

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

March 23rd 2013 02:54 PM

Re: Yet another nameless poem...

I love this a lot! There is a lot of vivid description and detail in this which makes it really great. :)
Maybe you can name it Savior?

Rhyfelwr

March 23rd 2013 04:10 PM

Re: Yet another nameless poem...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cataclysmic (Post 1010235)

I love this a lot! There is a lot of vivid description and detail in this which makes it really great. :)
Maybe you can name it Savior?

Haha :D My own suggestion by another poem coming back to me! XD Thanks though, great idea! :)

oldaccount

March 23rd 2013 04:23 PM

Re: Yet another nameless poem...

This is really good! I like the name Savior too :)

Le Papillon

March 23rd 2013 04:58 PM

Re: Yet another nameless poem...

:O thats awesome.
Its short in words, but that acctually helps with the discription and imagery.
I like it c: <3

DeletedAccount17

March 27th 2013 07:32 AM

Re: Yet another nameless poem...

This is very powerful! It's good. :) I like Dez's idea of the name "Savior". :)

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