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IF... (poem in progress)
If I gave you the key to my heart
Would you keep it safe? Or would you just toss it on a shelf Somewhere where anyone could take it away? If I told you my deep dark secret Would you tell me yours? Or would you just stare at me in disgust before turning and running the other way? If I told you that I loved you, Would you say you love me too? Or would you just laugh at me and glare, As you watched my heart slowly break? If I wore my heart on my sleeve Would you be careful no to break it? Or would you be reckless, knock it down And watch it break into a million pieces as it hit the ground? If I promised never to leave Would you promise me the same? Or would you just toy with my heart, Treat me like I’m just part of some big game? If I tried to brighten your grey day, Would you do the same for me? Or would you look the other way When I needed you the most? If I asked you an important question, Would you give me an honest answer? Or would you turn and walk away, Ignoring the things that I really want to know? If I told you I wished I'd never been born, would you really listen? Or would you just brush me off, and call me a drama queen? |
Re: IF... (poem in progress)
I like this and how there were questions in every stanza. It made it a really interesting read. :D
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Re: IF... (poem in progress)
I agree with Dez, the questions made it really interesting to read! :)
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Re: IF... (poem in progress)
Interesting and very nice. You did this well. :)
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Re: IF... (poem in progress)
This one is still a work in progress. I may add to, or alter it from time to time.
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