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the clock turns, the sun falls
darkness comes on life goes on you wondering where you're going what has come of it? Where did everything we know go? where did it all disappear too? when the darkness came, the clock turned all of it vanished into the past the darkness ever growing the world falling from beneath your feet or so it seems falling into the darkness not a speck of light in sight the crushing weight of darkness on your chest when all of a sudden someone somewhere grasps you by the hand your plung stopped by this mystery They lift you up onto the edge a stair case ahead of you they grasp your hand and you feel it something special, something you never knew you walk, the darkness disappearing as you walk walk up the flight of stairs to a world a world you never knew the brightest world you've ever seen something is different someone saved you but who is this? what is this? This is your new world a world guided by love love saved you something you never expected, you expected fantasy stopped your plunge into darkness brung you into this world of light changed everything from the worst to best the only thing it took was one grasp the grasp of the hand of love grabbing your hand, pulling you up from your endless plunge into darkness showing you, there is always a light it doesn't matter who you are there's always a light no matter how dark the darkness is no matter how far you plunged there is always light got bored wrote it in class haha, first thing i've wrote in awhile and changed up my style a bit. what ya think? |
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I haven't seen you post here in a while (since you haven't wrote in a while) but I'm glad you did! :P I do like this a lot! The last part is my favorite.
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I love this! It's great! :)
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This was my reaction:
:'( Lol, it honestly had me teary-eyed, but in a good way. :) This is so beautiful... WRITE MORE. MOAAAAR!!!! |
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Thanks everyone, I changed it up a little from my normal style and just randomly started writing it in class haha.
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