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Poem into a song
I want to make one of my poems into a song but I need help with it. any suggestions would be great heres the poem:
You Don't Care Go ahead and drink Drink until your drunk Because you apparently don't care What it's doing to you Or what it's doing to your baby girl you claim to love How long did you think you could fool us? And hide the fact that you are back on drugs Go ahead and pop those pills Snort the speed or whatever the fuck you're on now Because you apparently don't care What it's doing to you Or what it's doing to your baby girl you claim to love I really thought you were straightening up this time around But once again you just put on an act And lied straight through your teeth Telling us you have been going to meetings And staying away from alcohol But that was just a bunch of bullshit Just so you could make us feel happy even though they were lies So go ahead and lie all you want Lie to my face Because you apparently don't care What lying's doing to you Or what it's doing to your baby girl you claim to love We made plans a month ahead of time For us to spend the day and night together You kept telling me don't worry I come first So I got my hopes up But like usual just ended up Getting fucked over by my own mother The one who claims to love her baby girl Because instead of choosing bowling with me You chose to get high with your new boy toy You say you love me But I honestly think you love Alcohol and drugs more Than you ever did love me or ever could I honestly stopped believing you loved me a long time ago The word coming out of your mouth is bullshit to me I'm over this I'm sick and tired of standing by While I slowly watch you kill yourself Do you even notice what it's doing to me? I'm done worry about fixing are relationship You apparently didn't want to fix it as much as you led on I'm done I can't do it anymore I have to focus on me And do what's right and best for me So I'm cutting all ties with you You've had to many chance But no more Your baby girl you claim to love Is finally realizing you only give a shit about Alcohol, drugs and your new boy toy when you have one You don't seem to care about much of anything But I hope you realize This is killing me but I have to do what's best for me So I'm washing you out of my life This is my last good bye to you |
Re: Poem into a song
This is really powerful, but sad. /: unfortunately I have no ideas to turn it into a song... I liked the repetition though.
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Re: Poem into a song
why thank you:]
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