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She feels the anger rise up inside of her,
Something she's felt before,
It feels different, mixed with hatred
And despair,
She knows this feel just won't pass,
It's here to stay ,
Please just make this stop she'll pray,
The answer ?
A blade,
A shiny metal blade,
These wrists were made for slicing,
This live was made for living,
Thoughts come and go
No where to run
No where to hide
Just a blade and a story
One to be told,
No ears to listen,
No hands to hold.
She's alone.

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Re: the blade. - December 20th 2012, 09:46 PM
I could imagine this well! My favourite two lines were:
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These wrists were made for slicing,
This live was made for living,

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: the blade. - December 20th 2012, 10:47 PM
shivers ran down my spine as I read this: I know this situation all too well... Brilliant job though, the poem was really powerful and... just shivery.

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Re: the blade. - December 22nd 2012, 01:41 PM
I could relate to this. Thanks for posting. I hope you will share some more of you poems in the future
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Re: the blade. - December 22nd 2012, 01:43 PM
This was very well done I would love to read more of your stuff

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Re: the blade. - December 23rd 2012, 09:17 PM
This poem is very strong, and I can relate to it so much.

"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."

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Re: the blade. - December 23rd 2012, 11:52 PM
Very powerful. I loved it.


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