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Untitled Poem - November 18th 2012, 06:15 AM
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I wrote this a while ago but had nobody to show it to Let me know what you think and if you have any ideas for a title...

Life injected,
Life withdrawn.
Battered and dirty
on the sleeve, life is worn.

Half in, half out,
some people stand.
Bloodied knife and
heart in hand.

Stab it open,
feel the pain.
Forced emotion.
Severed strain.

It still beats strong
like a tribal drum
Unseen masks
hide souls, now numb.

I'm so happy because today I found my friends - they're in my head.
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Re: Untitled Poem - November 18th 2012, 06:29 AM
Wow. I love this. You could call it Life? Or something simple like that?

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Re: Untitled Poem - November 18th 2012, 09:15 AM
Thank you Yeah that's a good idea, thanks!

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Re: Untitled Poem - November 18th 2012, 01:48 PM
I like this! Good job

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Re: Untitled Poem - November 19th 2012, 11:31 AM
This is really awesome! I like it.

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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