out of the blood and dirt a poem

[Forgetit]

do you care
do you really
out of the ash and out of the snow
out of the blood and out of the dirt
while I'm dancing in the shadows
and your in the dark
does it feel good
the blood on your hands
is the knife pretty now
with all of the doom with all of the death all of the blood
it's okay don't be afraid I'm only going to kill you
as you killed me oh now your crying
do you feel how I feel when I cried
does it burn are you scared
it's okay it only hurts a second
how does it feel
to know you've lost everything
now let me ask you one more time
do you care
do you really

tell me what you think

[Tigereyes]

I love this! You did a great job writing this