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Poem and a Drawing - October 13th 2012, 09:03 PM
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(not sure how good the poem is. They were two separate things, but I fused them together.)



Everyone around me wears eyes of judgement.
Searching me over and detecting my
every flaw.

Thighs too big,
portions too small.
Waist to thick,
height too tall.

I trudge through my day and try to make it to the next;
to the point where everybody blurs together into one big
negative cloud over my muddled head.

Tears too heavy,
dreams too scary.
I will be happy,
when life is behind me.

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Re: Poem and a Drawing - October 13th 2012, 09:04 PM
Holy muffins that picture is huge.. So sorry about that! I have no idea how that happened...

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Re: Poem and a Drawing - October 13th 2012, 10:04 PM
Don't worry, the picture's fine. I like your holy muffins expression. And the picture.

That is a really powerful poem as well, something that can be related to!

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Poem and a Drawing - October 13th 2012, 11:05 PM
I like how your poem and drawing go together! I love the poem, it's very relateable.

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Re: Poem and a Drawing - October 13th 2012, 11:40 PM
I like this as well You're really a freakin amazing artist!
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