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WhisperingSilence September 30th 2012 08:54 PM

At the mercy of a blade
 
Silver, shiny, sharp,
Fallen mercy to the blade,
With a single drag across the skin,
You know its another battle you cannot win,
With single cut you've ever made,
Just remember you've become the victim of your mind,
With a single swipe of that blade,
The stresses of life start unwind,
Another battle you cannot win,
The blade has beat you once again
You've become a victim of you mind,
Fallen mercy to the metal touch of a blade.

Lumos. September 30th 2012 09:29 PM

Re: At the mercy of a blade
 
Great job! I really like this, and can relate. :) Keep writing.

Tigereyes October 1st 2012 12:34 AM

Re: At the mercy of a blade
 
This is really well written, and I can definitely relate to it. Good job!

oldaccount October 1st 2012 01:32 AM

Re: At the mercy of a blade
 
This is brilliant - definitely relatable. Great job :)

Validity October 1st 2012 06:19 AM

Re: At the mercy of a blade
 
Amazing!

Jay.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ October 3rd 2012 12:07 AM

Re: At the mercy of a blade
 
This is amazing and definitely relatable. Great job! :D

Just Peachy. October 3rd 2012 02:47 PM

Re: At the mercy of a blade
 
I like this because it's short but full of emotion. I also can relate to this, as can many.
This is good. :)

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