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TheQuietGirl September 10th 2012 06:06 PM

Darling (Poem)
 
I think I've seen you in my dreams, darling.
Holding together to seems of my past.
Stitching together what unknown lies ahead.
And adding colour to the present swatch.

I don't think you give me a second thought, darling.
Not looking up when I walk past your seat.
Don't look back when I walk to opposite way.
And not caring whether or not I make an appearance.

I think I'll see you in my dreams tonight, darling.
We can spend time atop the Eiffle Tower.
Perhaps a causual encounter on the streets of Bristol.
Or do you have other plans for the limbo?

CrimsonRed September 10th 2012 07:40 PM

Re: Darling (Poem)
 
I like it :) don't give up go for that one :)

TheQuietGirl September 10th 2012 11:00 PM

Re: Darling (Poem)
 
Thanks <3 LOL You mean go for the guy that I wrote this about? It took me a while to realise what you meant!

I don't know.. He's on my mind a *bit* too much than he should be already. ;)

Validity September 10th 2012 11:04 PM

Re: Darling (Poem)
 
Hey, I enjoyed it. I'd say strike up conversation with him and see where it takes you. Go with the flow :)

Keep writing,
Jay.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ September 11th 2012 12:24 AM

Re: Darling (Poem)
 
I really like this and agree, go for it and strike up a conversation!

CrimsonRed September 11th 2012 01:32 AM

Re: Darling (Poem)
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by TheQuietGirl (Post 944721)
Thanks <3 LOL You mean go for the guy that I wrote this about? It took me a while to realise what you meant!

I don't know.. He's on my mind a *bit* too much than he should be already. ;)

Lol sorry yes I mean for the guy you wrote thus about you obviously care for him and have feelings for him :D

TheQuietGirl September 11th 2012 12:46 PM

Re: Darling (Poem)
 
Thanks dolls :) I will try to ;)


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