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Darling (Poem) - September 10th 2012, 06:06 PM
I think I've seen you in my dreams, darling.
Holding together to seems of my past.
Stitching together what unknown lies ahead.
And adding colour to the present swatch.

I don't think you give me a second thought, darling.
Not looking up when I walk past your seat.
Don't look back when I walk to opposite way.
And not caring whether or not I make an appearance.

I think I'll see you in my dreams tonight, darling.
We can spend time atop the Eiffle Tower.
Perhaps a causual encounter on the streets of Bristol.
Or do you have other plans for the limbo?

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Re: Darling (Poem) - September 10th 2012, 07:40 PM
I like it don't give up go for that one


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Re: Darling (Poem) - September 10th 2012, 11:00 PM
Thanks <3 LOL You mean go for the guy that I wrote this about? It took me a while to realise what you meant!

I don't know.. He's on my mind a *bit* too much than he should be already.

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Re: Darling (Poem) - September 10th 2012, 11:04 PM
Hey, I enjoyed it. I'd say strike up conversation with him and see where it takes you. Go with the flow

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Re: Darling (Poem) - September 11th 2012, 12:24 AM
I really like this and agree, go for it and strike up a conversation!

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Darling (Poem) - September 11th 2012, 01:32 AM
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Thanks <3 LOL You mean go for the guy that I wrote this about? It took me a while to realise what you meant!

I don't know.. He's on my mind a *bit* too much than he should be already.
Lol sorry yes I mean for the guy you wrote thus about you obviously care for him and have feelings for him


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Re: Darling (Poem) - September 11th 2012, 12:46 PM
Thanks dolls I will try to

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