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Raggedy Man, Goodnight! August 26th 2012 04:32 PM

Poem about my nightmare
 
Running through the fields
There's nobody but me
Everybody has been turned
And there's nothing I can do.

I just continue to run
Even though I have no energy left
I hear a loud noise
A helicopter flies over me
But does not stop to help.

All I know is I have to keep running
Or they are going to get me
I find an abandoned house
And I hide in there
But I know they will find me
There is no escaping it.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ August 26th 2012 10:49 PM

Re: Poem about my nightmare
 
This is really descriptive and I love your word choice. :hug: I'm sorry you had to go through such a nightmare though!

Raggedy Man, Goodnight! August 26th 2012 11:27 PM

Re: Poem about my nightmare
 
Thank you. It seems I have been dreaming about the same thing since Friday night. They scare me a lot, especially when its one of them dreams where you see everybody you love die.

Tigereyes August 27th 2012 09:38 PM

Re: Poem about my nightmare
 
I agree with Dez. Great poem; sounds like a horrible nightmare though D:

Houseman August 27th 2012 09:44 PM

Re: Poem about my nightmare
 
I like this poem a lot! It reads like a story; is it zombies?

Eternal Dreamer ♥ August 27th 2012 09:47 PM

Re: Poem about my nightmare
 
Beautifully written. Keep writing.

Raggedy Man, Goodnight! August 27th 2012 10:34 PM

Re: Poem about my nightmare
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Houseman (Post 938143)
I like this poem a lot! It reads like a story; is it zombies?

Yes Ryan, my nightmare was about zombies, been having them since Friday night.

Thank you for the nice comments :)

Koharuchan August 27th 2012 10:57 PM

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Keep writing, this is good. Sounds like a bad nightmare though! D:

Raggedy Man, Goodnight! August 27th 2012 11:00 PM

Re: Poem about my nightmare
 
Thanks Haru. It was a horrible nightmare and it seems every time I go to sleep they keep following on from each other.


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