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Poem about my nightmare - August 26th 2012, 04:32 PM
Running through the fields
There's nobody but me
Everybody has been turned
And there's nothing I can do.

I just continue to run
Even though I have no energy left
I hear a loud noise
A helicopter flies over me
But does not stop to help.

All I know is I have to keep running
Or they are going to get me
I find an abandoned house
And I hide in there
But I know they will find me
There is no escaping it.
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Re: Poem about my nightmare - August 26th 2012, 10:49 PM
This is really descriptive and I love your word choice. I'm sorry you had to go through such a nightmare though!

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Re: Poem about my nightmare - August 26th 2012, 11:27 PM
Thank you. It seems I have been dreaming about the same thing since Friday night. They scare me a lot, especially when its one of them dreams where you see everybody you love die.
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Re: Poem about my nightmare - August 27th 2012, 09:38 PM
I agree with Dez. Great poem; sounds like a horrible nightmare though

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Re: Poem about my nightmare - August 27th 2012, 09:44 PM
I like this poem a lot! It reads like a story; is it zombies?

"My heart is warm with friends I make,
And better friends I'll not be knowing;
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No matter where it's going."

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Re: Poem about my nightmare - August 27th 2012, 09:47 PM
Beautifully written. Keep writing.
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Re: Poem about my nightmare - August 27th 2012, 10:34 PM
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I like this poem a lot! It reads like a story; is it zombies?
Yes Ryan, my nightmare was about zombies, been having them since Friday night.

Thank you for the nice comments
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Re: Poem about my nightmare - August 27th 2012, 10:57 PM
Keep writing, this is good. Sounds like a bad nightmare though!

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Re: Poem about my nightmare - August 27th 2012, 11:00 PM
Thanks Haru. It was a horrible nightmare and it seems every time I go to sleep they keep following on from each other.
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