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Arrow Poem without a title - August 11th 2012, 09:40 PM
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Blood, blood everywhere
Down my arms?
No one cares

Locked inside my room
My prison
The cuts are there
The pain has risen

Only for a minute
Or two
See my scars?
These ones are new

You see them
And ask me why
I'll make up a story
I'll have to lie

How does no one
Notice it?
My stories are stupid
My wrists are slit.

I don't know how much
I can take
A blade in mind
My hands they shake

I don't know how long
U can go on
My veins are drying
My bloods almost gone

As I say goodbye
To all I love
With my last breath
I float above.
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Re: Poem without a title - August 11th 2012, 09:42 PM
Second last stanza
I can go on
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Re: Poem without a title - August 12th 2012, 01:50 AM
This is really powerful and descriptive for sure. It is well written and just painted a picture in my mind. Great job!

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Poem without a title - August 12th 2012, 01:27 PM
I agree with Dez. Great job writing it; it was very descriptive.

"Just open your eyes and see that life is beautiful..." ~Sixx:A.M.
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Re: Poem without a title - August 15th 2012, 01:21 PM
that was really good...........great job.........

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