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(Poem) Remember? - July 27th 2012, 09:53 PM

Hey guys so here is another poem that I wrote recently! Thanks so much to all of those who read and responded to the last poem I posted, it means a lot to get your feedback! Hope you like this one, it's called "Remember?"


Remember when you said you'd never go,
Remember when you said you loved me so,

Remember when you were always there for me,
Remember when you did always forsee,

Remember when I told you I loved you,
Remember when you said you loved me too,

Remember when I shared all of my dreams,
Remember when you just loved me for me,

Remember that night I was afraid,
Remember when you came to my aid,

Remember when I started trusting you,
Remember when I believed in you,

Remember when you called me crying,
Remember when I kept on trying,

Remember that month we didn't talk,
Remember that all you did was balk,

Remember that day I talked to you,
Remember that day I said we're through,

Remember that I do love you,
Remember that it was the best thing to do,

Remember that I'll never forget,
Remember that I'm so glad we met.


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Re: (Poem) Remember? - July 28th 2012, 12:40 AM

I really like this! Good job! I like how you keep saying remember over and over again at the beginning of each line.
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Re: (Poem) Remember? - July 28th 2012, 01:37 AM

I love it every time I read it! I love the repetition a lot.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: (Poem) Remember? - July 29th 2012, 02:51 PM

I love it! I agree with Hannah and Dez. keep writing!





From day one I talked about getting out
But not forgetting about
How all my worst fears are letting out
He said, "Why put a new address on the same old loneliness?"
When breathing just passes the time
Until we all just get old and die
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Re: (Poem) Remember? - July 29th 2012, 08:17 PM

This is a really good poem! Hope to read some more
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Re: (Poem) Remember? - August 3rd 2012, 06:57 PM

Thanks so much guys! Your words of encouragement mean a lot and I'm really glad you like it! I might post another poem here sometime soon so keep your eyes open. But really, thanks again for supporting my poetry. Your opinion is always greatly appreciated! Love you guys,

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Re: (Poem) Remember? - August 3rd 2012, 08:29 PM

This is really good!




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Re: (Poem) Remember? - August 4th 2012, 04:50 AM

love it! Reminds me so much of someone.



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Re: (Poem) Remember? - August 4th 2012, 10:33 PM

Thanks so much for your input guys! It means a lot!

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Re: (Poem) Remember? - August 5th 2012, 08:09 AM

Title itself tells it all, all about reminiscing those memories whether it is good nor bad. Well written.
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Re: (Poem) Remember? - August 12th 2012, 06:28 AM

Thank you for your input! I'm glad you liked it.

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