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Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence -
July 17th 2012, 05:52 AM
My grades can show you I don't understand
And all these test can prove I dont learn right
But it would only take you to talk to me to know that I have good ideas
My cuts can show you I am in pain
And my blood can prove what I am willing to do for you
But it would only take you to help me to know that there is hope for me
My lack of smile shows you I am unhappy
And my tears can prove that I am unable to cope
But it would only take you to hold me to know that I can be strong
My body limp can show you I have give in
And the empty bottle on the floor can prove that I had no regrets
But it would only take you to love me to know that I can live
Last edited by Lelo; July 17th 2012 at 10:00 PM.
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Re: Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence -
July 17th 2012, 10:40 AM
Hi Marie!! 
Good for you!
I think it's a good poem.
Keep in mind that the one person you CAN count on to talk to, to help, to hold and to love you... IS you!!!
GBH - Craig!
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Re: Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence -
July 17th 2012, 10:53 AM
(=I agree with Craig too. I really like this, it’s sad but genuine and true.
Stay strong beautiful, you’re worth looking after,
xxx
You can usually find me on my tumblr, I’m here for you (=
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Re: Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence -
July 17th 2012, 03:38 PM
Aw I love this! Great job! Keep up the good work!
~I was always scared of everything, even the carousel.~
~Don't worry about me. I'm sort of feeling fine, but by tomorrow, I'll be back on my feet again.~
-Goodnight Tonight
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Re: Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence -
July 17th 2012, 06:35 PM
this is truly an amazing inspiring poem. Really, it moved me and it already shows how strong of a person you are <3 keep up the good work, and stay strong <3 you arent alone
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July 17th 2012, 10:02 PM
Thank you so much for the support and encouragement. This is the first poem I have ever written, I am normally a song and story person but apperently my fist try wasnt too bad. THANKS
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Re: Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence -
July 18th 2012, 05:05 AM
I agree, the poem is very moving.
"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."
"For those who don't care, for those who can't see, never give up, always thrive to be free."
Smile, you are beautiful www.operationbeautiful.com
Blessed Be!
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