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chemicalpeople July 12th 2012 11:29 PM

Anonymous (poem)
 
you will never hear me
my sweet talk, voice too soft
devour my speech, you pick it apart
pick those words apart, take them down
a stammer doesn't clue you in
the blue-eyed gleam revolves in a riddle

a gap in my smile
lips that tremble, and you don't know why
so nice and smart, you should really be ashamed
of all the things you never got to say

stars, you can't find their constellations
but on their own they dazzle the same
the big ball of fire you always miss
but those stars blink and ignorance is bliss
blissfully yours, rightfully mine

not worth your time, not worth my mind
a thousand words you'll never read
something lost, you'll never find


-Bailey



P.S. I'm not looking for any constructive criticism but if you feel compelled to feed it to me, go ahead. No one is stopping you. c:

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ July 12th 2012 11:56 PM

Re: Anonymous (poem)
 
I really like this. You're such a great writer but I've always loved reading what you write and you know it, haha. Your words make my brain colourful. ^^

Tigereyes July 13th 2012 01:47 AM

Re: Anonymous (poem)
 
I like it! Good job!

Le Papillon July 13th 2012 01:47 AM

Re: Anonymous (poem)
 
i like this. nicely written.

chemicalpeople July 14th 2012 03:12 AM

Re: Anonymous (poem)
 
Thanks~ :)


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