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Bailor
Welcome me, I'm new! *
Name: Bailey
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Location: California
Posts: 4
Join Date: July 12th 2012
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Anonymous (poem) -
July 13th 2012, 12:29 AM
you will never hear me
my sweet talk, voice too soft
devour my speech, you pick it apart
pick those words apart, take them down
a stammer doesn't clue you in
the blue-eyed gleam revolves in a riddle
a gap in my smile
lips that tremble, and you don't know why
so nice and smart, you should really be ashamed
of all the things you never got to say
stars, you can't find their constellations
but on their own they dazzle the same
the big ball of fire you always miss
but those stars blink and ignorance is bliss
blissfully yours, rightfully mine
not worth your time, not worth my mind
a thousand words you'll never read
something lost, you'll never find
-Bailey
P.S. I'm not looking for any constructive criticism but if you feel compelled to feed it to me, go ahead. No one is stopping you. c:
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Living the dream.
TeenHelp Superstar **************
Name: Dez
Age: 28
Gender: ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Pronouns: They/Them
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Re: Anonymous (poem) -
July 13th 2012, 12:56 AM
I really like this. You're such a great writer but I've always loved reading what you write and you know it, haha. Your words make my brain colourful. ^^
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Member
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Re: Anonymous (poem) -
July 13th 2012, 02:47 AM
I like it! Good job!
"Just open your eyes and see that life is beautiful..." ~Sixx:A.M.
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a secret you can keep
I can't get enough *********
Name: Samuel
Gender: ~no~ (they/them)
Location: Anywherebuthere
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Join Date: August 24th 2009
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Re: Anonymous (poem) -
July 13th 2012, 02:47 AM
i like this. nicely written.
formerly snowstorm, GoneBeyondRepair, and Breathless in Love Repose en Paix, Grandad/mom H., Sito, Nay, Mary, Aunt S., Peter, Katie, Lexi, Mrs. Radoye, Mandii, Trevor, Megan, Uncle T., Erika, Aunt R., Braxton, Connie, Adam, Grandpa, Buttons, Aunt Barb, Pi, Grandma ♥ The world will bleed its bloody tale. People will throw their stones. But the one thing you must always remember is: You no longer walk alone. -Blake Bliss
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Bailor
Welcome me, I'm new! *
Name: Bailey
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Location: California
Posts: 4
Join Date: July 12th 2012
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Re: Anonymous (poem) -
July 14th 2012, 04:12 AM
Thanks~
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