three thousand feet (poem)

[Henrietta123]

Standing at three thousand feet
Looking down at my defeat
The winds are screaming in my ear
The waves are calm and seem so near
Distant memories flood my mind
The past has been so unkind
The devils stream run from my eyes
The devils horn straight through my heart
I sit and wonder how they'll act
And ask myself do they really care
Looking down from seashore edge
I see his face along the waves
I think of him and what id say
If i could see him one more day
Id say daddy daddy why'd you leave
I was seven how could you leave
I know you didn't ask for this
A single tumor decides your fate
10 years later im standing here
This is famous din't you hear
My blood red arms spread out like wings
One step closer, ill fall to you
I stood there at three thousand feet
The devil pushed me from hells mouth

[Le Papillon]

very well writen. strong, emotional. i like it

[EmNZ]

Wow, this is really good. It’s beautiful and really sad. I like it, very real.
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[better-than-ecstasy]

I love all of this! The emotion is powerful! Thanks for sharing!

[.:PrincessZelda:.]

This was really good!

[Tigereyes]

I agree with everyone else. This is really emotional and very well written.

[Houseman]

This is a great poem, thank you for sharing it with us

[Disappearing]

This poem is very good. It made me get a little emotional at the end. Thanks for sharing.