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HisPrincess July 4th 2012 06:02 AM

(Poem) A Big Mistake
 
Hey guys,

So I have been keeping an eye out on the Self Expression section of the forums for awhile now. Well... I have a little secret to share. :hehe: I LOVE poetry and love expressing myself through my writing. I've been a nervous wreck about sharing my writing because I don't want it stolen, but here is a poem I just wrote. If you guys like it, let me know and I'll share some more with you all. :)

~ Angelica

A Big Mistake

You know that feeling,
When you have so much to say,

I sit here and struggle,
Knowing I won't get my way,

There is no way to make you get it,
No way to make you understand,

That though all of this feels bad now,
It is all part of His grand plan,

Though I'm still really confused,
I think we need to take a break,

The constant fighting, arguing,
Did we realize what was at stake?,

You know I love you,
Or so you say,

But do you get it?,
Love came your way,

For now this is only small,
After all, this is just a break,

But bear with me as I work through it all,
As I hope I didn't make some big mistake.

(To anyone who knows- My poetry can't get stolen when I post it here, correct? Thanks for any info!)

Eternal Dreamer ♥ July 4th 2012 09:53 PM

Re: (Poem) A Big Mistake
 
This is awesome, Keep writing <3

Cap's girl July 4th 2012 10:10 PM

Re: (Poem) A Big Mistake
 
This is really good! I love this :) good job

Koharuchan July 6th 2012 08:19 PM

Re: (Poem) A Big Mistake
 
Good job, this is very well written. Keep writing!

Lumos. July 7th 2012 01:36 AM

Re: (Poem) A Big Mistake
 
I really like this! Keep writing! :)

JollyRancher. July 7th 2012 05:19 AM

Re: (Poem) A Big Mistake
 
I found it beautiful.i cant even explain what i want to say


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