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Houseman June 28th 2012 06:17 AM

If I died Tomorrow (poem)
 
If I died tomorrow
Would you come to my wake?
If you cried from the sorrow
Would they say it was fake?
If I tried to borrow
What I couldn't take...
Would they carve me hollow
For just one mistake?

If the world doesn't want me
Why shouldn't I leave?
I doubt that these churls
Would whimper or grieve;
So I'm asking you please
If just for my sake,
Come by tomorrow
To cry at my wake.


(Remember folks, read till the punctuation, not just the end of a line).

DeletedAccount69 June 28th 2012 06:01 PM

Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
 
I liked this. Thank you for sharing :)

Lil'OrphanAnnie June 28th 2012 07:20 PM

Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
 
I really like it. it flows nicely. :) good job.

Le Papillon June 28th 2012 11:34 PM

Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
 
i like the flow. nice word choice(yet again)
and id be very sad if you died :( :hug: Ryan's awesome

ImiD June 29th 2012 12:04 AM

Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
 
That's really good <3

Tigereyes June 30th 2012 03:47 AM

Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
 
It's really good! Thanks for sharing. Kinda reminds me of the song "What if I Died Tomorrow?" by About Last Night.

.:PrincessZelda:. July 1st 2012 11:40 PM

Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
 
That was really good! :)


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