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If I died Tomorrow (poem)
If I died tomorrow
Would you come to my wake? If you cried from the sorrow Would they say it was fake? If I tried to borrow What I couldn't take... Would they carve me hollow For just one mistake? If the world doesn't want me Why shouldn't I leave? I doubt that these churls Would whimper or grieve; So I'm asking you please If just for my sake, Come by tomorrow To cry at my wake. (Remember folks, read till the punctuation, not just the end of a line). |
Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
I liked this. Thank you for sharing :)
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Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
I really like it. it flows nicely. :) good job.
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Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
i like the flow. nice word choice(yet again)
and id be very sad if you died :( :hug: Ryan's awesome |
Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
That's really good <3
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Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
It's really good! Thanks for sharing. Kinda reminds me of the song "What if I Died Tomorrow?" by About Last Night.
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Re: If I died Tomorrow (poem)
That was really good! :)
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