If I died Tomorrow (poem)

[Houseman]

If I died tomorrow
Would you come to my wake?
If you cried from the sorrow
Would they say it was fake?
If I tried to borrow
What I couldn't take...
Would they carve me hollow
For just one mistake?

If the world doesn't want me
Why shouldn't I leave?
I doubt that these churls
Would whimper or grieve;
So I'm asking you please
If just for my sake,
Come by tomorrow
To cry at my wake.


(Remember folks, read till the punctuation, not just the end of a line).

I liked this. Thank you for sharing

[Lil'OrphanAnnie]

I really like it. it flows nicely. good job.

[Le Papillon]

i like the flow. nice word choice(yet again)
and id be very sad if you died Ryan's awesome

[ImiD]

That's really good <3

[Tigereyes]

It's really good! Thanks for sharing. Kinda reminds me of the song "What if I Died Tomorrow?" by About Last Night.

[.:PrincessZelda:.]

That was really good!