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(Highly triggering, specifically on suicide, depression and SH) Help. (A Poem) - June 17th 2012, 03:15 PM
This thread has been labeled as triggering by the original poster or by a Moderator. Please take this into consideration before continuing to read.

Critique is welcome, just keep it constructive I wrote this a few minutes ago. Don't worry about me, it doesn't express how I'm feeling. It's about a girl who committed suicide and regretted it at the last minute.

This does not at all promote or support SH or suicide. Please get help if you are in a situation involving such.

"Help."

An echoing silence bouncing through the halls
Whispering tears through midnight's call
We found her lying in her "beautiful" silent
The crimson trickles- hush now, be quiet
Her lips stirring words spoken too late
An ominous SOS cry trying to be made
Choked out too silent, much too hushed
Losing our minds inside the sight's rush.
She finally shudders,
She finally sighs,
Said the word before she closed her eyes,
"Help."

"What's done in the dark will be brought to the light."
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Re: (Highly triggering, specifically on suicide, depression and SH) Help. (A Poem) - June 18th 2012, 12:40 AM
This is amazing, you used a lot of imagery and emotion in this and it created a powerful image.

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: (Highly triggering, specifically on suicide, depression and SH) Help. (A Poem) - June 18th 2012, 03:29 AM
one word for you: AMAHZING seriously you had me tranced by line 1. beautiful, so emotional, really its wonderful <3
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Re: (Highly triggering, specifically on suicide, depression and SH) Help. (A Poem) - June 18th 2012, 05:12 AM
This is really good. I agree with Dez and Tay. Keep writing!




From day one I talked about getting out
But not forgetting about
How all my worst fears are letting out
He said, "Why put a new address on the same old loneliness?"
When breathing just passes the time
Until we all just get old and die
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