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JollyRancher. June 15th 2012 01:11 AM

Poem 1
 
The shadows under her eyes
its clear she hasnt slept
shes been crying her eyes out
again over him

the scars on her arms
they each tell a story
they show how many times
she has cried to herself

she walks around with a smile
if they could only see
she's screaming off
inside her head

her life is a lie
she knows the truth
so she doesnt try
and falls to the ground

maybe someday
someone will help her up
but until then;

The shadows under her eyes
its clear she hasnt slept
shes been crying her eyes out
again over him


the scars on her arms
they each tell a story
they show how many times
she has cried to herself


she walks around with a smile
if they could only see
she's screaming off
inside her head forever like me

Tigerlily. June 15th 2012 04:08 AM

Re: Poem 1
 
It's so pretty, but so sad, but so pretty. Again, another very well written poem from you, and all the emotion, you are really good at putting emotion into words like this.


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