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a poem for my friend
Don’t be too late
This our fate Would you hurry along? It’s the middle of dawn For its too late And I know we must wait Baby be strong Wish I never was wrong So here we are now It’s getting too loud Baby you’re smart Just take my heart So just turn around And take what you’ve found But now I’m lost It can’t be that much Now that you’re gone There’s no rising sun Would you take back? Everything that we had And I must cry Is it goodbye? Don’t you want to be here? And get rid of my tears I’ll always miss you Won’t you come through? If I have to leave home Even if I’m alone I know you’re out there Do you still care? Say you’re sorry Is this how it must be? |
Re: a poem for my friend
I really like this, it is such a good poem. :)
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Re: a poem for my friend
I liked this :)
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Re: a poem for my friend
as always, i like it. emotional, and shows just how you feel. nicely done cuz<3
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Re: a poem for my friend
I really like the emotion and feeling you have put into this poem, Rachel. It's a really good poem! :)
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Re: a poem for my friend
thank you all. Its so nice to hear such positive comments.:hug:
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