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better-than-ecstasy June 13th 2012 11:07 PM

a poem for my friend
 
Don’t be too late
This our fate
Would you hurry along?
It’s the middle of dawn
For its too late
And I know we must wait
Baby be strong
Wish I never was wrong
So here we are now
It’s getting too loud
Baby you’re smart
Just take my heart
So just turn around
And take what you’ve found
But now I’m lost
It can’t be that much
Now that you’re gone
There’s no rising sun
Would you take back?
Everything that we had
And I must cry
Is it goodbye?
Don’t you want to be here?
And get rid of my tears
I’ll always miss you
Won’t you come through?
If I have to leave home
Even if I’m alone
I know you’re out there
Do you still care?
Say you’re sorry
Is this how it must be?

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ June 22nd 2012 02:36 AM

Re: a poem for my friend
 
I really like this, it is such a good poem. :)

DeletedAccount69 June 22nd 2012 07:54 AM

Re: a poem for my friend
 
I liked this :)

Le Papillon June 24th 2012 02:24 AM

Re: a poem for my friend
 
as always, i like it. emotional, and shows just how you feel. nicely done cuz<3

Oldaccount. June 26th 2012 08:36 AM

Re: a poem for my friend
 
I really like the emotion and feeling you have put into this poem, Rachel. It's a really good poem! :)

better-than-ecstasy June 28th 2012 10:10 PM

Re: a poem for my friend
 
thank you all. Its so nice to hear such positive comments.:hug:


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