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Poem: Mathematics -
June 7th 2012, 03:46 PM
I wrote this in my Calculus class. What do you gals and guys think of it?
"Mathematics"
Math to me is such a bore,
And everyday: another class.
I know that two plus two is four
So where's the point in learning more?
I'm waiting for the time to pass
Past the time when I can leave
And sit and smoke upon the grass,
But still that time is far, alas,
Attent in class I'll wait and grieve.
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Yet there isn't a train I wouldn't take,
No matter where it's going."
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Re: Poem: Mathematics -
June 7th 2012, 03:47 PM
I really do like this poem! It's honestly great!
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Re: Poem: Mathematics -
June 7th 2012, 04:08 PM
I like this, it's one of those things where I sat and read it thinking 'ahh this is so me'
It's good, and funny in a way, the part which said 'I know that two plus two is four, so whats the point of learning more' was my favourite.
KEep writing, I'd love to read more.
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Re: Poem: Mathematics -
June 7th 2012, 10:00 PM
I have to agree with Reverie. that line is my favourite. As long as you can add and subtract why do you need to know anything else? I like the poem
I've said it once, I've said it twice, I've said it a thousand fucking times
That I'm OK, that I'm fine, that it's all just in my mind
But this has got the best of me, and I can't seem to sleep
It's not 'cause you're not with me, it's cause you never leave
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Re: Poem: Mathematics -
June 7th 2012, 10:20 PM
"I know that two plus two is four, so what's the point of learning more". Haha that is soo how I felt in algebra 2. Especially when we had a student teacher and she didn't seem to even know that much.
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Re: Poem: Mathematics -
June 8th 2012, 12:50 AM
This poem is so true.
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Poem: Mathematics -
June 9th 2012, 03:33 AM
thats awesome i felt like that every year exept this year (i LOVEEEDDD geometry) ahahahaha great job
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Re: Poem: Mathematics -
June 9th 2012, 03:56 AM
I feel the same way. I really like this. Keep writing!
From day one I talked about getting out
But not forgetting about
How all my worst fears are letting out
He said, "Why put a new address on the same old loneliness?"
When breathing just passes the time
Until we all just get old and die
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Re: Poem: Mathematics -
June 9th 2012, 04:06 AM
Math needs to grow up and solve its own problems. I despise math, it was always my worst subject; I'm just math retarded, I guess. Wonderful poem, I liked this a lot. I can relate to it.
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