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Poem: my dear friend tina
My dear friend Tina, what have I done?
I've made another mistake, while you've made none Without your guidance I am lost Deserting our friendship comes with a great cost I left you for doom When you were in your darkest gloom I won't forgive for what I've done I've made another mistake, while you've made none I thought of you today When I looked down from my window, where the ground lay Thought of all the times you wanted to fall All those times I answered your call But now here I sit alone And glance at my non-ringing phone I've thought about what you and me had done I've made another mistake, while you've made none I float in this world, stuck in the inbetween I ponder over the memories of what I've seen I remember you at your prime If only I could re-live that one time But now all i remember is our last fight Sitting here in the dark lonely night Thinking about what I could have done I've made another mistake, while you've made none You won't listen to my apology I do not blame you for not listening to me You wouldn't care if I died right now And today I make one last vow I wont turn my back on a friend And if I shall then hell I will descend I won't forget the evil I have done I've made my final mistake, while you've made none Tell me what you think, also read my other poem called: Tina's letter. Tina these poems go out to you, I miss you my old friend, and I am sorry. |
Re: Poem: my dear friend tina
This is a really good poem, I like the emotion in it. I can really feel words that you wrote like you meant every one of them. I'm sorry for whatever happened. If you need anyone feel free to message me.
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Re: Poem: my dear friend tina
Thank you, I really did mean it...it's been a tough time dealing with the mistakes I have made :(
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Re: Poem: my dear friend tina
wow, you are a very good writer! I love the emotion! I can feel exactly (or close) to what you mean just by your words. I very much admire your style of writing. If you would ever like to talk feel free to PM me. I am new here but Ive posted 4 or so of my own poems. hope to talk to ou soon!
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Re: Poem: my dear friend tina
Thanks, I do my best.
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Re: Poem: my dear friend tina
i love the emotion in this, and the repitition really helps that along. very well written. :hug: feel free to PM me if you need anything
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