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WhisperingSilence February 17th 2009 12:28 PM

Addiction
 
There it is
On the side
Sharp and pointy
Just like every other day
Screaming use me use me
It's my Addiction
Not my only addiction
Just one of them
One of many
There it is
On the side
In its bottle
Glass beside it
Screaming pour me out pour me out
Drink me Drink me
It's my Addiction
Not my only addiction
Just one of them
One of many
There it is
On the side
Looking at me
In its bottle
Screaming open me open me open me
Drink me Drink me Drink me
It's my addiction
Just one of them
One of many

what do you think ? please reply

Brooke Basketcase February 17th 2009 01:18 PM

Re: Addiction
 
Wow! that's powerful and the repition makes it allthe more powerful. It kind of reminds me of the poem from "The perks of being a wall flower" about the boy and poetry :] thats why I love it sooo much. Thank you for sharing.


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