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Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

September 8th 2014 08:26 AM

Doctor Who Poem

As I stand and look at the man
Who is standing outside of the
blue Police Box.

He looks older now
He keeps his feelings hidden away
As he travels the stars
He regrets all the mistakes he ever made

Sorry its not very long, my mind went blank haha

Mahray

September 8th 2014 08:28 AM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

I like it, even short. It says what it needs to say :)

Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

September 8th 2014 08:38 AM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mahray (Post 1134539)

I like it, even short. It says what it needs to say :)

Thank you :)

Kintsukuroi.

September 8th 2014 02:59 PM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

I like this! :hehe:

Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

September 8th 2014 03:24 PM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

Quote:

Originally Posted by unbrokenwarrior (Post 1134639)

I like this! :hehe:

Thank you Lexi :)

DeletedAccount63

September 8th 2014 03:49 PM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

I like this. Your a good writter

Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

September 8th 2014 06:08 PM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

Quote:

Originally Posted by *Tinker Bell* (Post 1134651)

I like this. Your a good writter

Thank you :)

Azure.

September 9th 2014 12:02 AM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

I really like this! :)

Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

September 9th 2014 08:07 AM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lucent. (Post 1134738)

I really like this! :)

Thank you :)

luckiicloverxx

September 9th 2014 09:16 AM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

The last two sentences are perfect.

luckiicloverxx

September 9th 2014 09:16 AM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

Oh sorry. Last two lines*

Chai.

September 9th 2014 01:55 PM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

I like this. :)

Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

September 9th 2014 02:22 PM

Re: Doctor Who Poem

Thank you :)

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