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goodbye poem to my doctor(comments appreciated)

Dr. allen
This poem is for you
to say thanks
for everything you do.
You have seen me
through good times and bad
Seeing you leave, really makes me sad
I cant explain
How much you have helped
I never knew how to express how i really felt
I feel so betrayed
I dont want you to go
But i know deep down
You have helped me grow
Thank you so much
For the help you have given
I hate to say goodbye
but i will keep living

What do you think? i was going to write a letter, but this is easier for me. I feel like its crap honestly. any suggestions would be appreciated

Re: goodbye poem to my doctor(comments appreciated)

This is really good and I can tell you that I have had several therapists leave me before and this poem describes how I feel, especially the feel betrayed part. I had one therapist who promised that she wasn't going to leave me like everyone did but she broke that promise and that really hurt.