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Poor Little Angel. (triggering suicide, self harm, abuse) -
June 18th 2013, 07:17 PM
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Poor little angel,
with her hair all tangled,
she fought so hard,
but it was all too much,
her innocence shattered,
shes bruised and battered,
her little heads swirling,
the razor twirling,
its time to say goodbye,
she wont wake up, after tonight.
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Re: Poor Little Angel. (triggering suicide, self harm, abuse) -
June 18th 2013, 07:31 PM
This isn't my best work and I would really appreciate if I could get some help on this. Thanks.
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Re: Poor Little Angel. (triggering suicide, self harm, abuse) -
June 18th 2013, 08:42 PM
it's really good! So emotional
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Re: Poor Little Angel. (triggering suicide, self harm, abuse) -
June 18th 2013, 11:40 PM
I personally like it.  Maybe just let any other ideas flow and then edit after?
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Poor Little Angel. (triggering suicide, self harm, abuse) -
June 22nd 2013, 06:03 AM
I think it's excellent, I don't think it's needs changed at all.
"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."
"For those who don't care, for those who can't see, never give up, always thrive to be free."
Smile, you are beautiful www.operationbeautiful.com
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